B.A 7

From "Radical But Right" by Sarah Wells, the argument states about animal rights. The writer supports her claim through plenty of resources. Moreover, she states well compare with the counterarguments which state animals don't have right, animals are dumb so they don't have interests, or proteins can be gained from animal meat.

Because of role as human property which human always been the master upon animal, it is true that animals can't be protected well even though we have some obligations toward them. However, because actually they have emotions and ablities to feel pain, the writer showed that we should keep their rights. Yes, it is true that they can't voice their discomfort, causing people to doubt their pain. Here is a point that we can find persuaviness of this essay. It shows credible references such as books, Professional documents or Government websites such as U.S. department of Justice. By showing a scientific result, it shows animals' nervous systems are structure similarly to humans and function in the same ways.
Because they are capable of suffering, it is right to keep them safe. Also, the essay claimed that there is no need to kill or consume. For people, it is no require to wear jewlry, fur coat or leather jacket. Rather, it is good to have a vegetarian diet for people nutrionally. Some people in counter side argue, the vegetarian lifestyle doesn't fulfill perfect diet because the protein which can be gained from meat is lack. According to essay, actually higher protein concentrations can be gained from soybeans and certain chesses. The vegetarian diet will good for society as reduce the obesity rates , mediate starvation, and cause nonviolence.

Because the essay provides good resources and it applied well against with counter side, I really enjoyed to read it.

sixth blog

The essay, “A Way With Words, or Away With Word: Effect of Texting and IMing on Language” by Timothy barranco was a great example of research paper. He used proper paraphrase such as a sentence that explains vernacular language system - “vernacular language systems, whether txt, Ebonics, or some other dialect of English, should be valued for adding to the standard English language and also for their cultural significance as they tie together regions and groups of people…”
Not only paraphrase but also quotation also used appropriately from resources. The reference from findings of Sali Tagliamonte and Derek Denis, that proves the bias of stereotypes about text usage statistically can be one of example – “the use of short forms, abbreviations, and emotional language is infinitesimally small, less than 3% of the data”. The writer primarily states common prejudice about effect of texting on language and shows why people think like that way. Also, he represents how other opinions stand differently. From such organized format, readers can think not only one view about effect of texting but also other ideas about it. Overall, to readers, this research gives a great contribution to break bias out and lets them understand texting is a creative tool to show potential in English language.

blog assignment

People don’t estimate winners and losers of history. The history itself does. For people who didn’t live at some era, they don’t know any truth, and the history showed how the time and people determines winners and losers. The Bush and the Obama doctrine can be shown as an example of loser and winner of history.People saying Obama doctrine is winner of history that is no-word needed. It cooperates with other countries in a peace, avoids meddling in the internal affairs of other countries. Also it follows balancing theory so even it uses a tactic of containment of threats, it keeps up US strength which is the most important purpose as maintain a country. As maintaining United States hegemony, compellence, influence internal politics of other countries and unilateralism, Bush doctrine was judged as loser’s doctrine. Even these two doctrines looked for same goal, how history divided as two parts?
History which can be define as a time moves continuously, also change its characteristic. It makes hard to people think what is good or bad. Because there was a point that loser of history could be regarded as a winner, part of the history also was written as if they were definite winner. This fact proves through existence of Realist and Liberalist. These two unlike respects proves how history can be shown differently and how winners and losers wrote history.

blog assignment #4

Everyone has places where they belong. From the place, people experience comfort, protection, and relief. That's why people gather together eventually. However, Liu's situation is quite different because she came to United States with a purpose 'To learn English and America's culture'.

I had a similar experience in 2006, when I came to United states asa first time. Like Liu, I came to US with a same goal. I lived with American family so I had to follw their life of routine. I had to eat their food even though I didn't like, I had to speak English even though I want to speak Korean, my native language and I had to get used to their way of thinking even though I couldn't understand with my Korean thinking. I missed my family, friends, food, culture even language. Something I never thought that I'll going to miss became myself, my lover, and my belonging. However, from the city I lived in US, I couldn't find anything nor anyone which belongs to Korea. As a result from the first year in US, I got improved English skill, I learned American way thinking and I could eat American food without any difficulty.

I truely understand Liu's situation. However, I don't agree with the action that Liu took - follow Chinese. He had a dream that he watned to accompl;ish. Once he decided to do something, he should finish no matter how it is difficult. Because it was something he wanted to do before he met the chinese and missed chinese culture.

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part 2.
stumble: V/N
You put your foot down awkardly while you are walking/ running and nearly fall over
Preeminent: ADV
Someone or something is more important, powerful or capable than other people or things in the group
Complacent:ADJ
Very pleased or feels that they do not need to do anything about a situation, even though the situation maybe uncertain or dangerous.

differences in gesture...etc #3

What differences in gestures, eye contact, and body space have you noticed between your own culture and what you have seen in the United States? Why do you think this is? What similarities in nonverbal communication have you seen between the two cultures?


There is a story that happened when I had just came to United States from Korea. I met a dean of my school and I bowed deeply with "Hi, sir" and I found out later that I don't have to bow in United States. That was the starting point to figure out the differences in gestures, eye contact, and body space between my country and United States - contradiction and similarity like colors pink and red.

Have you ever felt what is 'Culture Shock'? As a person who experienced it, I think it starts from gesture difference in one culture and another culture. In Korea, people should act with gesture that shows your respect about the other. In Korea, there are several kinds of bow. Like in United States, you can greet friends with waived hands. However, you have to drop and raise your neck slowly when you meet older person. If you meet older person for the first time in a long time, it's respectful to bow down upon knees. It's also courtesy to dead person but this case, you have to do twice. There is one difference about crossing legs and arms. In United States, people usually don't feel awkard when they do cross their legs or arms. However, if you do that in Korea in front of older people, they will look down you becuase they think it is rude to do in front of elders.

Lots of Korean students who are just came from Korea have a difficulty when they talk to American due to eye-contact. In United States, people think if you do not look eyes each other, they think you have dubious and untruthful mind. In contrary, in Korea, when a person did something wrong and if the person look the other's eyes (staring), we think that's really impolite. From the difference, there is a story of my friend in America.. He actually lied to teacher before, and when the teacher found out that he did lie, she asked, "Did you do somthing wrong?" He couldn't look her eyes that shows shame and sorriness that actually what Koreans think people should do. However, as an American, his teacher got really mad after that.

For body space, there is one thing that I hope Koreans learn from Americans - hug.
Even though Koreans do hug, it is limited as an expression for a lover. What I like about hug is, in United States, lots of people do hug for a lots of reasons. They do hug as expressions of love, celebration,and consolation, etc. with anybody. If I do hug friend of mine in case it's boy, he probably think I like him as a boy or I am drunk. There is one more funny thing as difference, lots of girls do link arms each other as showing thier friendship. If you do that in United States? People probably think the girls are in a relationship.

Although there are lots difference between two conturies, like the saying, 'if you can't talk in its language, you can communicate with body-language', lots of gestures are similar.
For example, if you put your finger in front of your mouth, that means 'be quiet' or 'hold on'.
If you roll thumb and index finger together, that means 'ok' or 'money'. If you put hands behind your head, and move, that shows uncertainty. You also can show affection by wink your eyes or put your finger and blow.

In this world, there are lots of language that you can't understand. However, nonverbal cmomunication is a key to communicate with others but you should know the difference each other becuase even though it seems similar, sometimes the meaning is totally different - like colors, pink and red that stand as 'color' but have different feelings.

Blog Assignment #2 (option3)

As we live, we meet numerous people. The moment to meet those people can be come by an accident or by a settled appointment. The choice to know each person can be your choice or the other's choice.

If we just pass by the person during we find a class in a hallway, the person is just a passenger but, if someone drop a book so that if we look each other and talk few minutes, by introducing, we could make a new friend. However, the point is what about the impression about the new person. More exactly, how can you decide what kind of person you just met.

I believe the first impression of the person I meet and the first impression of me who other think will affect other to decide whether if they want to meet me again or not.
Like the context, 'The First Four Minutes', absolutely, the first attitude and face expression affect the impression. Try imagine that you dropped a book and the person who picked up your book say, "Are you ok? Here is your book. I hope you are not late for your class. You better hurry up, it's almost 9'o clock!" with a friendly smile. That kind of favor will make you feel I want to meet the person again. There is a different case. You dropped a book and it's right in front of the person, and he or she says, "Watch out your eyes! You almost hurt my foot, Gosh!" Can you feel same impression like the first person?

I really think the first impression is important as the impression after you know the person better. I usually determine nice person by how often they smile or laugh, how they talk, and how they listen you well. Most of time, my determination is right. However, the word 'exception' is not for all right cases.

I have a friend who keeping our friendship for 6 years. When I think about the first time I met him, I don't think he gave a good impression like now. He was not that friendly. Lots of my friends didn't want to be around him. Even one day, one of my friend cried because of him. He didn't do his work so that I could often see him who scorned by teachers. I thought he hangs around with notorious students in my school. However, after I got to know him, I realized all this first impression about him was totally wrong. Actually, he was a sweet guy who cares about other people. Even he didn't do his work, he actually knew all the information we learned so that he got a good score. He just don't want to get along with strangers so that still his first impression is not that good. When I ask my friends or people around me, their impression about me is similar after they knew me well and actually, I want to show true me by the first impression. However, through my friend's case, I realized first impression is important but it can't determine truely what kind of the person is. Remember! The definition of impression is 'A strong effect produced on the intellect, feelings, conscience' but I want to add this few word at the end- 'formed by either first time or later'.

Blog Assignment part 2

In this world, there are bunch of things that wonder people, and one of the reasons that why those things amaze people is because they are continuously changing. If I example one of things, I could say it is 'language'
Like fashion style, environmental change, thinking of people, language also change by culture and society. Of course, there are form that actually taught from school system and nobody can't deny that is right and basic form when they started to learn their language. However, the language that changed by several factors such as culture and society differ between generation.
I believe, the fact will never change after 10 years, even 100 years. If I say something to my grandmother even my parents with the style of language that I usually use to my friends, they don't understand what I'm saying.
It doesn't bound only one country. There is a story that occurred last thanksgiving weekend. I spend the weekend in Georgia with my friend, Jeannie who is from Vietnam. Even though, it was short break, I was excited to know different culture that I never knew about.
One day, we were invited dinner by another Vietnamese family, and I found one interesting things about language. Mr., and Mrs.Nguen were in 40's., and Jeannie who is my age were talking in the first meeting. During their talk, Mrs.Nguen started to laugh loud, and Jeannie showed awkward smile to me. She said, "I was talking and told one word that I use in my age group. When they don't understand what I meant, I explained, and that's why they started to laugh."
The languages also have different style depend listener. In English, when we meet the President Obama, even Professor. Tilman, we don't say, "Hey, What's up!". It also same in my first language, Korean. Actually, in Korean, the difference of formal and informal style is more distinguishable than other language. We have all different honorific depend who you talking to. Even simple word, 'you' has several different words with diverse nuance. That's one uncomfortable but comfortable ( I really don't know what side I'm in) thing when I learn English.
I say to older American people, using word 'you' but every time when I do this, I thought like, 'Should I say like this, is it correct to say this?"
Due to these characteristics, in one language we could find difference according to speaker. I think languages are obviously amazing thing to understand world.